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Days and weeks seemed to pass. She was never quite sure how much time had gone by. Nor did she know where she would be from moment to moment. There was a peace that came with being removed from day to day activities, yet there was something that gnawed at the back of her mind. Something had happened to her. Something really awful... Click to read more
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Confessions of a commaholic

I recently asked a friend to review this site for any grammatical and/or mechanical errors. She is a former editor and has a meticulous eye and knowledge base. It’s pretty embarrassing to put up a site, declare oneself a writer, and then make blatant, grammatical mistakes.

My friend was kind enough to comb through the various posts and call me to discuss her findings. She started slowly at first, choosing to focus on small, stylistic errors. Once she realized that I was open to criticism, however, she let loose and started giving me a list.

Truth be told, I kind of had a feeling about what she was going to tell me – at least in part. Although I may not have wanted to hear it, I sensed that it was time to finally acknowledge the truth. I knew that my dirty, little secret was going to come out eventually. One can only hide these things for so long. Needless to say, I was almost grateful to have it out in the open. Acceptance, is after all, the first step.

You see, I am a commaholic, and I have been for most of my life.

I’m not sure why the comma has tortured me for so many years. I’ve had a love/hate relationship with the punctuation mark since first picking up a pencil. There’s something about the squiggly, little character that makes me want to place it just about everywhere. Like someone who feels compelled to pour salt all over their food, I am powerless in my attempts  to comma everything. Read the rest of this entry »

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A fatal car crash on a parkway in present day, suburban New York sets into motion a journey of self-discovery that unlocks the truth about a young woman’s family lineage and its connection to a sinister secret which dates back to biblical times.... Click to read more
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